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M'Bowwarrior:
merci beaucoup. les autres te paraissent bien donc ?
LarrxX:
Euh, c'est vrai que le texte de Xlatoc est mieux que le tien Manu, mais il reste des erreurs à corriger. Si j'ai le temps, j'essaierai de te faire mes propositions pour ton texte ce midi.
M'Bowwarrior:
--- Citation de: LarrxX ---Euh, c'est vrai que le texte de Xlatoc est mieux que le tien Manu, mais il reste des erreurs à corriger. Si j'ai le temps, j'essaierai de te faire mes propositions pour ton texte ce midi.
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tu sais, si j'ai demandé votre aide pour ça, c'est que justement je suis sur que certains d'entre vous font mieux que moi.
merci beaucoup en tout cas à vous.
LarrxX:
Voilà ma traduction de tes réponses en français.
Why do you want to become an astronaut? Maximum 750 characters
Ever since my childhood, I have been curious about my surroundings, on earth as in space. Astronaut was an inaccessible dream for me, so I turned to Science and chemistry, a field in which my curiosity could partially be satisfied. Now that I have finished my studies, the possibility of becoming an astronaut offers itself to me and I cannot let it pass. Bettering humanity through my work would bring me enormous satisfaction, especially if I could do it through this field that means so much to me.
Finally, becoming an astronaut would be the fulfilment of a childhood dream as well as an incredible opportunity for me to satisfy my natural curiosity, and also use my knowledge and abilities for a good cause. It is an amazing adventure!
In your opinion, what are the main tasks that should be performed by an astronaut? Maximum 750 characters
Astronauts have to accomplish many important tasks such as conducting scientific experiments of all kinds in order to study microgravity, space vacuum, cosmic rays and their effects, to name but a few fields. They should also be able to take care of the station they live in and the vehicle they travel in, and repair them if necessary. Astronauts must be able to make fast and efficient decisions when the situation demands it. They also must, through their good cheer, prevent the smallness of the space station from becoming a burden. Finally, astronauts must make people dream through their stories.
Write a candid description of yourself as a person (including assets and limitations) Maximum 750 characters
I am a frank, honest, open and curious person. This curiosity led me to undertake scientific studies. I love participating in group activities such as board games. I tend to keep searching for an answer when I ask myself a question on any given subject. I can sometimes be shy depending on the circumstances but I am mostly open with others and full of warmth. I am a team player and am motivated to always keep things going which often made me find myself in a leading position. I have a good sense of humour. Few things repel me. I can sometimes be impulsive but when the situation demands it, I can remain calm and careful.
Use this space to add any further information to support your application (e.g. other professional or operational skills, experience with radio communication, exceptional versatilitiy, special awards or honours, etc.) Maximum 750 characters
I have good programming knowledge in fortran, visual basic pro.net and DOS languages.
(je mettrai beaucoup plus que ça comme info ici moi, au moins parler de tes travaux de thèse!)
M'Bowwarrior:
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Merci beaucoup
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(je mettrai beaucoup plus que ça comme info ici moi, au moins parler de tes travaux de thèse!)
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ah oui, pas con du tout ! j'y avait pas pensé... c'est con mais oui ;)
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